Spellcasteress Enchantment

' for as long as men remember does she reside at her famous rock, while her hair and nails grow longer and longer, she is spellcasting, with the pedals of roze and inscense of apple, she is chanting the sacred words, for decades has she tried to find the one true love, the one person with who she could die. many times had she been fooled, has she misjudged, and many times did she feel her heart broken and in a cutting pain. locking up all who have hurt her, all who have fooled her, and even all who are not good enough, she still sits up there casting obscur spells, to find her one true love '

I started this pencil work planning on making it much bigger. but I finnaly decided to stick to this image.
Now I am thinking of editing it, and adding a more natural background, but I have my doubts, what do you think ?

Comments are very much appreciated. Thank you.

-2B pencil
-more than 20 hours.